Sleeping Valor

*nods* The ending is okay. It's a very good piece.

"Time for bed." Those three words I feared the most. My initial reaction was to think this might sound better as 'Those were the three words I feared the most'. ...

*HUG!!!* Thank you guys! XD I wasn't sure I'd get the reviews in time for tonight, but you all came through. :D You've saved my butt. And thanks for all ...

I had to read it for class. it was good, but it was bad. I liked the story, but it was dragged out over forever and ever. So I can ...

I actually bought How I live now. Though I read it quite a while back. The plot is vague in my memory, but I did enjoy it at the time. ...

As requested, I'm back to give you some more. ^_^ Desccription: I think you could do a lot more of it. This piece is mostly just an exchange between the ...

lol. Aww. I need to remind myself that motivation is only as far away as YWS. *hugs!* I am, of course, working on this story. Though maybe some people will ...

Thanks everybody! XD No time (o.O Soo....tired....) to respond to each and every critique, but I've read them and I apreciate all your advice and feedback. ^_^ It's very helpful ...

=P I think I got most of it. Thanks for the feedback. *was sure this had vanished into the depths of the forum* I will try and work on my ...

lol! XD The funny thing about the humor, is that it's entirely ad-libbed. I was typing up the original and decided I didn't like the way it went (girl had ...

Read Chapter one! ^_^ I won't give you the bit by bit break down, just 3 things stand out to me: 1) everywhere = 1 word. :wink: 2) Again, I ...

>.< Yeah, I thought of those things just after I posted the second part. I won't do that for the next chapter. =P *will do like she did for DoaV ...

XD Look! The beginnings of an update list! *does a happy dance* Somehow, I feel insanely special when people ask to be told when I update. I'm glad you liked ...

Note to self: never post parts in different posts. You don't like it. *moves part two the first post* =P Waste of space, no?

=P Because it's a romance story, it's just not evident in these first two pages. In fact, the whole romance it pretty to slow progress (page-wise), for all that (when ...